My Awesome Mihi

WALT: to learn our mihi.
For Maori language week we had to learn our Mihi. We had to make it in to a drawing and then present it to the class. here is my Mihi


Here is the doc with all the information and translation. Click me
Some of the words I didn't know what they meant but I asked my teacher. It was really scary going up in front of the class to present it. But everyone did a good job. what did you think of my google drawing? 

My fabulous 5 Sentence challenge.

today in writing we did the 5 sentence challenge. the 5 sentence challenge is where we get a photo to write a story on but the story has to only be 5 sentence. Here is the photo that we had today.

Here's my story.

I didn’t mean to hurt him, but somehow I did. I started crying as I watch him limping out of my gate with his little dog at his side. I don’t even know what I had done to upset my kind grandfather.  My cat walked up to me and pushed his head against my legs but I didn’t notice. I call out to him but he doesn’t turn his head I shout his name but still he doesn’t look back so I run into my little house, hoping he will forgive me.

My Amazing Spell

WALT: to be able to write A couplet Poem.
We looked at Macbeth from Williams Shakespeare and looked for all the ingredients and methods. When we were writing we had to use alliteration and gruesome ingredients. Here is my finished Spell.

   

Its very hard to write a couplet poem because its hard to make the words rhyme.Could you please leave a comment about what I did right and what I need to improve.

The Amazing 100 Word Challenge.

Today at Writing we did the 100 word challenge which is where we get some word or a sentence the we have to include in our story but you also can't go over or under 100 words. Our sentence for today was: but what colour should it be? . It very hard to get it exactly on 100 hundred words and still get a average story. Here is my story

Me and my friend, Piper were hiding behind the school hall in our special spot, making up our awesome prank.

“Have you got the ingredients” I whispered because the teacher was after us.  

“Yeah I have everything except the Food colouring” whispered Piper, opening up her bag.

“How about we sneak into the art room and grab some paint” I suggested.

“Sure” said Piper.

We poked our head out looking for the teacher. We ran across the field to the art room.  

“ but what colour should it be?” I asked Piper.

“Why not booger green” I laughed.

“sure” laughed piper.

Could you please leave a comment on what you think I did well and what I need to work on.