click here to read my recount!!!

WALT: write a recount about a time when you had to eat something that you didn’t want to!
in writing for the past three days we have been writing a recount on when we had to eat something we didn't want to. But I couldn't think of ANYTHING to write about so Miss Keys said I can make something up. So its not really a recount but I wrote it like one. the highlighting means:
red=dialogue
orange=sound effects
yellow-past tense words.
green= thoughts and feelings
so here is my story. Enjoy

“Oh no, I clogged the toilet” I muttered trying to flush them down.
It all started when mum called us for dinner. I raced to the table and sat there eagerly waiting for mum to dish up the food. My smile slipped from my face as mum slid beans on my plate. I absolutely HATE beans. I use to like them when I was little but my taste buds changed. I made a grossed out face which mum spotted. “ you have to eat them Ammalina” she said passing out beans to everyone else. I stared at my plate in horror and glanced around to see if anyone was watching. I swiftly grabbed them and stuffed them into my pocket. “As smooth as a ninja” i thought smiling.
I finished off my dinner and snuck into the bathroom. I locked the door and walked over toilet. I emptied my pockets out and flushed the toilet. Nothing. “What's happening” I thought. I tried it again but the beans didn't go away. Then the water started rising and the toilet over flowed. “Uhhh” i said backing away. Mum knocked out the door “is everything ok in there?” she called out. “No” i answered. “I'm gonna come in, unlock the door” mum said nocking. “ um just a sec” I murmured. Ew I had to  get the beans out fast. I scrunched up my nose and plumaged my hand into the toilet. “Ew ew ew” i thought gagging. I chucked the beans in the bin and cover them with some toilet paper. I Looked at the water all over the floor and quickly unlocked the door. Mum barged in and looked at the mess on the floor and immediately started interrogating me.”what did you do?, why is it clogged, how did you do it?. Was it you who did it?” I thought mum would tell me off for telling the truth so I kept lying to her.
Once Mum had investigated the toilet she called a plumber. He came round as quick as he could and started working on the toilet.It took him only about ten minutes to find out what happened. He came out holding a single bean. “This is what was causing it.” I saw mum glance at me so I took off to my room. Then a herd the plumber leave and the flip flop of my mums jandles down the hall way. I tried to hide but I was too late. My Mum came walking in holding the wooden spoon. “ Im dead” I thought.

I hope you enjoyed my story. I would love if you left a comment saying what I could improve on. Byeeee

What Are Volcanoes?-My Amazing Explanation Writing!

WALT: Write an explanation using the correct structure.

What are volcanos?

A volcano is an opening in either a mountain or a ground which allows hot rock, ash, smoke, gases
and lava to breakout from below the surface through a pipe-like outlet called a vent. These eruptions
form a cone-shaped land form made of these materials. Volcanoes are really dangerous and hot when
they erupt and could kill or badly injure you. The gases that come out of the volcano can be really
dangerous for your lungs.

What are the parts to a volcano?

There are lots of parts to a volcano. The most important one is the magma chamber, It is located under
the earth's surface and this is where all the magma and gasses are stored. Next there is the earth crust
. The mountain is formed by the volcanoes old eruptions which is lava and ash. Going up through the hil
l is the pipe called the vent, which the lava comes up through. At the top of the hill there is the crater.

What is the difference between Lava and Magma?

Magma is made up of melted rocks and it is stored under the earth's crust in the magma chamber.
Lava is magma that reaches the surface of the earth through the vent.

How do volcanoes erupt?

The gas particles in the magma start to form bubbles and as the bubbles rise they start to expand.
Soon the bubble are to strong for the surrounding rock and the rocks fractures, allowing the magma
to get to the surface. Once at the surface the lava runs down the side of the hill, flowing quite fast, and
a big ash cloud forming over the hill.

I really liked writing this text but it was a bit hard because I didn't really know that much about volcanoes.

here is the slide of all the info about writing  this work click here

please comment on what I did good and what I could improve on.

My Amazing writing!!!!!!!!!!

WALT: Write an explanation about how an object works.
in writing we were learning how to write explanation about how an object works. we got to chose an object from nine things. I chose the wheelbarrow. Her is my finished work

How does it work? A Wheelbarrow.

Firstly, the wheelbarrow was a stand or the legs. It has two them near the back of the wheelbarrow so then you can put it down and it won’t fall backwards.

Secondly, the wheelbarrow has a wheel so you can move it around easily. It make is so you can move dirt and stuff from place to place without having to carry it and hurt your arms.

Thirdly, it has two handles that you hold while you are carrying the wheelbarrow.

Lastly, you have the tray thing which is the main part of the wheelbarrow. The tray is for you to put the stuff in while you move it around.

please comment about what I did good and what I can improve on.