at cybersmart we got to play around with sumo Paint. Which is a thing where you can drawing basically anything. there is a whole lot of tools to use to make it look cool. I sort of got the hang of it. Here Are my drawings.
Kia ora, I am a student at Mairehau High School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, December 10, 2018
Why cats are better than dogs.
For writing ,when some of our class was doing first aid, we got to do a free choice persuasive writing. We got to pick what every we want to write about. I chose Cat are better than dogs because i've always been I cat person but lots of my friends like dogs better. So here is my writing.
I strongly believe that cats are better than dogs because cats are smaller so you can cuddle them more easily, you don’t have to walk them, you don’t have to pick up their Poop and you can leave them alone for more time than dogs.
Firstly, cats are easier to cuddle because they smaller. Cats are lighter and tiny so it is much more easy to sleep than having a big dog stretched out on your bed. Cats are better than dogs because they are sooooo much fluffier than Dogs.
Secondly, cats don’t need to be walked. Which is so much better because dogs need to be walked everyday, even when its raining. But to exercise a cat all you need to do is find a toy are start chucking it everywhere and your cat will race after it.
Thirdly, Cats are way better because you don’t have to pick up their stinky poo. Dogs you have to potty train so they don't pee on the floor but cats go outside. Also Cats sleep a lot so you don’t have to worry about leaving them home alone. Did you know cats sleep for around 16 hours day. They are very independent so basically all cats need from you is food and your love.
So that is all the reasons way I think cats are way better than dogs. They are Better to cuddle,you don't have to walk them, you don't have to pick up they poop And you can leave them alone.
Please leave a comment about what I did good and what I could improve on.
Thursday, November 29, 2018
My Amazing Video
In Cybersmart we got to have a play around with a thing called WeVideo. WeVideo is a thing were you can edit or create videos. Here is my video. Make sure you have volume.😂😂
My Persuasive Ad
In writing we had to make an Ad for a product. We could choose out of a car, a pair of shoes, a circus or a smoothie. We did a draft then edited it. Then we got to make a google drawing. we had to make it bright and colourful.

Please leave a comment on what I did good and what I can improve on.
Tuesday, November 20, 2018
My fabulous 100 word challenge
My 100 word Challenge
Me and my brother, Sammy, were Walking through the forest. Sammy was on his old bike. He raced ahead of us and I stopped to look at a treehouse. I hear a frightful scream and a rustle of leaves. I start running to see what it is. I stop at a tree. Sammy’s bike was in the tree and on the seat was a lump that looked like a human .I let out a cry but I shut up. I could hear a quiet muttering. It sounded like a rhyme. I let out a scream. I was in the tree.
Friday, November 9, 2018
My Wonderful Persuasive Writing
WALT: Be able to write a persuasive text.
For writing we had to make a persuasive writing about how the Beach is better than the pool. When we had done our draft we had to highlight these thing: Pink is the reasons , Yellow is the time connectives,green is the logical connectives,blue is the strong emotive words. we had to set our writing out with the introduction first, then the reason paragraphs and then the conclusion.
These are the reasons I strongly believe the beach is better than the pool. It cost less, it’s better for your health, you can have more fun and it's got more space. Therefore the beach is better than the pool.
I hope you like my writing please leave a comment on what I did good and what I could improve on.
For writing we had to make a persuasive writing about how the Beach is better than the pool. When we had done our draft we had to highlight these thing: Pink is the reasons , Yellow is the time connectives,green is the logical connectives,blue is the strong emotive words. we had to set our writing out with the introduction first, then the reason paragraphs and then the conclusion.
I think the beach is better than the pool because it is free, there is more space, its open anytime and got more things to do.
Firstly, The beach has way more space than a pool has. At the pool there is only a few pools there, and they might have some age limits so there's even less pools, but at the beach there is no age limit and you can go as deep as you want, plus you don’t have to keep looking if your going to run into someone.
Secondly, There is more things to do, like at the beach you can go swimming, body boarding, surfing, run around and just playing on the sand, but in a pool you can only swim, play a few games that doesn’t involve running and a few competitions. At the beach you can run around all you want, but at the pool you can only walk. The beach is better when you fall over because when you fall on the beach you land on the squishy sand, but at the pool if you slip you fall on to hard concrete or tiles.
Thirdly, without a doubt the beach is better than the pool because it's free At the beach you can go anytime you want and It doesn’t cost anything, only if your children don’t beg for an ice-cream, but at the pool it cost quite a lot if you have a big family and also you could drive all the way to the pool and then the pool might be close because of a code brown, plus it has a closing time. If the pool has a cafe the food/drinks are always really expensive.
Lastly,I am certain that the beach is better than the pool because the Beach has nice,fresh air but the pool has stuffy, chlorine air, which sometimes can give you a headache. At the beach it has way better scenery too, And it's all natural. The beach has nice water but at the pool there probably is pee in the water. The beach is a nice place to walk you dog too but at the pool you not allowed animals.
These are the reasons I strongly believe the beach is better than the pool. It cost less, it’s better for your health, you can have more fun and it's got more space. Therefore the beach is better than the pool.
I hope you like my writing please leave a comment on what I did good and what I could improve on.
Wednesday, October 31, 2018
My Wonder 100 Word Challenge
Today at Writing we did the 100 word challenge which is where we get some word or a sentence the we have to include in our story but you also can't go over or under 100 words. Our sentence for today was: ..."Because I said So".... It very hard to get it exactly on 100 hundred words and still get a average story. Here is my story:
Could you please leave a comment on what you think I did well and what I need to work on.
I was sitting on my fat couch watching Catfish in the dark when I heard noise that sounded like a dying
Sheep. I jump up and rushed into the hallway. I saw a dude wearing a pink leotard overtop of black
leggings, and yellow leg warmers. He was half out of my window that always jammed. He froze.
Sheep. I jump up and rushed into the hallway. I saw a dude wearing a pink leotard overtop of black
leggings, and yellow leg warmers. He was half out of my window that always jammed. He froze.
“Put your hands up” he cried.
“Why do I have to?” I asked
“because I said so!” He shouted. He was still half way out of the window so I just pushed him a little bit and he tumbled out the window.Could you please leave a comment on what you think I did well and what I need to work on.
Friday, September 14, 2018
My Awesome Mihi
WALT: to learn our mihi.
For Maori language week we had to learn our Mihi. We had to make it in to a drawing and then present it to the class. here is my Mihi

Here is the doc with all the information and translation. Click me
Some of the words I didn't know what they meant but I asked my teacher. It was really scary going up in front of the class to present it. But everyone did a good job. what did you think of my google drawing?
For Maori language week we had to learn our Mihi. We had to make it in to a drawing and then present it to the class. here is my Mihi
Here is the doc with all the information and translation. Click me
Some of the words I didn't know what they meant but I asked my teacher. It was really scary going up in front of the class to present it. But everyone did a good job. what did you think of my google drawing?
Tuesday, September 11, 2018
My fabulous 5 Sentence challenge.
today in writing we did the 5 sentence challenge. the 5 sentence challenge is where we get a photo to write a story on but the story has to only be 5 sentence. Here is the photo that we had today.
Here's my story.
I didn’t mean to hurt him, but somehow I did. I started crying as I watch him limping out of my gate with his little dog at his side. I don’t even know what I had done to upset my kind grandfather. My cat walked up to me and pushed his head against my legs but I didn’t notice. I call out to him but he doesn’t turn his head I shout his name but still he doesn’t look back so I run into my little house, hoping he will forgive me.
My Amazing Spell
WALT: to be able to write A couplet Poem.
We looked at Macbeth from Williams Shakespeare and looked for all the ingredients and methods. When we were writing we had to use alliteration and gruesome ingredients. Here is my finished Spell.
We looked at Macbeth from Williams Shakespeare and looked for all the ingredients and methods. When we were writing we had to use alliteration and gruesome ingredients. Here is my finished Spell.
Its very hard to write a couplet poem because its hard to make the words rhyme.Could you please leave a comment about what I did right and what I need to improve.
Wednesday, September 5, 2018
The Amazing 100 Word Challenge.
Today at Writing we did the 100 word challenge which is where we get some word or a sentence the we have to include in our story but you also can't go over or under 100 words. Our sentence for today was: but what colour should it be? . It very hard to get it exactly on 100 hundred words and still get a average story. Here is my story
Could you please leave a comment on what you think I did well and what I need to work on.
Me and my friend, Piper were hiding behind the school hall in our special spot, making up our awesome prank.
“Have you got the ingredients” I whispered because the teacher was after us.
“Yeah I have everything except the Food colouring” whispered Piper, opening up her bag.
“How about we sneak into the art room and grab some paint” I suggested.
“Sure” said Piper.
We poked our head out looking for the teacher. We ran across the field to the art room.
“ but what colour should it be?” I asked Piper.
“Why not booger green” I laughed.
“sure” laughed piper.
Monday, August 27, 2018
How to make a amazing quality blog post
In Cyber smart we are learning how to make a quality blog post. We got told to make anything that will teach you guys about what we learnt. I picked A google slide Because its the easiest to use.
I had no idea what to do at first but then I asked my friends what to do. I had started on a google drawing but then it had not enough room so I started my google slide.
This is the slide that gave us all the information. Is the layout I used good? Did you learn anything new? Could you please leave me a comment about what I did good and what I need to work on.
Friday, August 24, 2018
My Fabulous Calendar Art
For our calendar art we got to pick either a drawing or digit art. For the drawing we picked an animal to draw their eye, then we found pictures of the animals eyes so we can look at them when we're drawing. We could colour them in with pastels or colourd pencils. I chose the pencils so then I could blend them in. For the digital we took a photo Of ourselves then we used a website called Fotor. In Fotor we could put filters on our Photo and add stickers. I liked my eye better because I always look terrible in photos.It took me quite a while to get the right shape for the eye and to pick the colours that I did. I did a good draft so I traced my draft.
Sunday, May 27, 2018
Monday, May 7, 2018
Purpose of a Blog Post
😈We are learning what the purpose of our learning blogs are. Check out why we blog.😈
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