I was sitting on my fat couch watching Catfish in the dark when I heard noise that sounded like a dying
Sheep. I jump up and rushed into the hallway. I saw a dude wearing a pink leotard overtop of black
leggings, and yellow leg warmers. He was half out of my window that always jammed. He froze.
Sheep. I jump up and rushed into the hallway. I saw a dude wearing a pink leotard overtop of black
leggings, and yellow leg warmers. He was half out of my window that always jammed. He froze.
“Put your hands up” he cried.
“Why do I have to?” I asked
“because I said so!” He shouted. He was still half way out of the window so I just pushed him a little bit and he tumbled out the window.Could you please leave a comment on what you think I did well and what I need to work on.
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