Kia ora, I am a student at Mairehau High School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, April 30, 2018
6 comments:
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hello Ammalina,
ReplyDeleteI think your unicorn animation it amazing. It is really funny and sad at the same time! did you think of making more clouds in the sky, why is there only one?
-piper
hello Piper
ReplyDeleteThanks for commenting on my blog. I hope this animation made you smile. Theres only One cloud because its a really happy and sunny day;P.
Ammalina.
Hey, Hi, Hello
ReplyDeleteThis animation is really cool and sad why did the human die. The end is really funny What do you think will happen next?
Kayla
Hey, Hi, Hello Kayla
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comment. The human died because he was very mean to the unicorn. I think what will happen next is that the Little baby unicorn is going to grow up and then meet a very mean human and the humans going to die:).
See you later, potata.
-Ammalina
Hi Amalina It’s Fantastic Freya here, from Parkview Parua School.
ReplyDeleteI loved watching your animation I actually watched it twice. My favourite part was when the man got hit by lightning once, and then tried to be an angel but got hit by lightning again. How long did this take you to make? Did you think about giving them names? Next time you could Add another story. I enjoyed this so much i just want to keep watching.
From Freya :D
ReplyDeleteHi Freya,
thank you so much for the comment<3. When the man got hit by the lightning was one of my favourite parts too!! It took me quite a while because I didn't really know what I was doing so I think it was about 4 weeks. I named the unicorn Bob and the man Geoff but nobody else:) Thanks again for the comment and I'm glad that you enjoyed it.
Byeeeeee ;P